

my fisrt story redidI wrote a story a while ago, but it seems not so good...^^" but then I got the comment from suikerdiamant that she doesn't really get the plot...and she offered to redit it..I think is't much better than mine...so I wnat to post it here ^^my fisrt story redid
It was a cloudless night. A little brown-red fox was running through a thick forest, searching for food. It was Naruto, who's chakra went out of control a few months ago and made him transform into a fox, making him change back only when he found someone he cared very much for. Then he saw a boy with brown hair and an a furry jacket sitting near a campfire. His bag


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Yes, come to me. Kyuubi smirked.
SAAASSUKKEE!!! Sakura cried out as he headed right for Kyuubi. Sasuke! NO stop!! Kiba and Neji yelled.
Sasuke Naruto whispered.
HAHA! DIE BRAT! Kyuubi yelled tail coming right for Sasuke.
SASUKE!! Everyone yelled.
Sasuke
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Sasuke blinked. Then again. And once more. Kyuubi flinched. F-fool Everyones remained silent. Sasuke, finally


SasuNaru: CryThe sakura trees blooms today And the pink leafs cover your grave I´m here for the first time The gravestone is in simple gray I know that if you were to choose you´d make it be orange Or some kind of stupid colour Memories flushes through my brain With closed eyes I lean back my head The smooth wind makes my hair wave softly It´s almost as if I can feel your smile It is a sunny day That is why I dared to go here today The sun, fire has always been on my side You were like the sun On my side Golden hair, tan skin and skyblue eyes TheSasuNaru: Cry
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